Time : 2020-11-08 16:41:13
Điểm: 8/10
Being attracted by the modern technology equipment and distracted from competition, people have not recognized that communication or exchange between family members today seems to be too limited until somethings make them feel regretful.
The modern life brings more conveniences for people to connect together even they live far apart. Going through internet, social network, email, all family members can communicate together easily but in the past, it took so long time for them to receive information from their relative via courier if family members live in different countries. Thanks to technological development, parents can contact with their kids frequently for reminding, instructing and control anytime they need via software applications that make advantaged conditions for them to talk together with cheap price.
However, it seems the modern technology is taking all free time of people because chatting, watching and playing game online always are more interesting than talking with other people in family. The images of family members sitting together but paying attention on their smart phone is becoming popular even children are busy with their favorite pleasure. Besides that, the modern life with pressures because of competition makes some people feel tired of communicating when coming back home but playing games or surfing web. Above that, living in the world flat with standard living better people seem to be colder and more selfish especially the young who do not want to spend time exchanging or communicating with their parents but showing their feeling on the social networks. While some parents seldom spend time talking with children to find down any problem happening to them but surfing Facebook.
In conclusion, so many interesting things on the internet have distracted people from communicating with other family members beside the busy life pushes people apart from each other then all family need to do something to bring members together.

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Being attracted by the modern technology equipment and distracted from competition, people have not recognized that communication or exchange between family members today seems to be too limited until somethings makes them feel regretful. The modern life brings more conveniences for people to connect together even they live far apart. Going through internet, social network, email, all family members can communicate together easily but in the past, it took so long much time for them to receive information from their relatives via courier if family members live in different countries. Thanks to technological development, parents can contact with their kids frequently for reminding, instructing and controlling anytime they need via software applications that make advantaged conditions for them to talk together with at cheap price. However, it seems the modern technology is taking all free time of people because chatting, watching and playing games online are always are more interesting than talking with other people in family. The images of family members sitting together but paying attention on to their smart phone is becoming popular even children are busy with their favorite pleasure. Besides that, the modern life with pressures because of competition makes some people feel tired of communicating when coming back home but playing games or surfing web. Above that, living in the flat world flat with better standard living better people seem to be colder and more selfish especially the young people who do not want to spend time exchanging or communicating with their parents but showing their feelings on the social networks. While Whereas, some parents seldom spend time talking with children to find down any problem happening to them but surfing Facebook. In conclusion, so many interesting things on the internet have distracted people from communicating with other family members; besides, the busy life pushes people apart from each other then all families need to do something to bring members together.

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7.5/10