Time : 2020-10-10 20:18:45
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Some people bear in mind that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens being any happier. Meanwhile, I do disagree to a certain extent. I will discuss both views in this essay.

On the one hand, apparently, the more prosperous each country is, the more democracy each citizen enjoys. Rich countries that are unlikely to appear more dangerous criminals like murder and robbery bring a safe and higher quality of life. It goes without saying that so terribly does the lack of money cause that all residents have to earn a lot of salaries with different methods as well as feeling nervous to carefully keep their own properties. Some developed countries, especially those which are well-known as modern civilized areas, may have plenty of laughter and long longevity. As a result, its rich economy involves the well-being of a country in general.

On the other hand, there is no doubt that there was a dose of factors affecting the peacefulness and happiness of an individual such as friends and family. In fact, people do earn a love from parents, which is the carefulness without strings attached. It can be seen obviously that unconditional love is like a muscle, it needs a daily workout in spite of either less or more cash all around the world. Take Vietnam for example, it can be seen as a developing country that the percentage of happiness is the same as happy as the proportion of richer countries.

In conclusion, economic development is believed to be a tool to create enjoyment in each wealth country. However, it is evident that there was a variety of sectors to boost the peacefulness and blessedness.

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Some people bear in mind that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens being any happier. Meanwhile, I do disagree to a certain extent. I will discuss both views in this essay.

On the one hand, apparently, the more prosperous each country is, the more democracy each citizen enjoys. In rich countries that are it is unlikely to appear more dangerous criminals like murder and robbery and that brings a safe and higher quality of life. It goes without saying that so terribly does the lack of money cause that force all residents have to earn a lot of salaries money with different methods as well as feeling nervous to carefully keep their own properties. Some developed countries, especially those which are well-known as modern and civilized areas, may have plenty of laughter and long longevity. As a result, its rich economy involves the well-being of a country in general.

On the other hand, there is no doubt that there was a dose of factors affecting the peacefulness and happiness of an individual such as friends and family. In fact, people do earn a love from parents, which is the carefulness without strings attached???. It can be seen obviously that unconditional love is like a muscle, it needs a daily workout in spite of either less or more cash all around the world. Take Vietnam for example, it can be seen as a developing country that where the percentage of happiness is the same as happy as the proportion of richer countries.

In conclusion, economic development is believed to be a tool to create enjoyment in each wealthy country. However, it is evident that there was a variety of sectors to boost the peacefulness and blessedness.

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