Time : 2020-10-11 16:48:28
Điểm: 7/10
The economic development will increase the living standard of citizens and make them comfortable but it will be not sure, if they feel happier when they get further money because happiness depends on other factors in the life.
Of course, it is so great for citizens to live in rich countries. Thanks to abundant reserve budget, citizens in these countries will not deal with lack of food or disease without healthcare like underdeveloped nations, they also are met all demands of facilities and infrastructures then make they feel relax and happy. However, further economic development cannot make people be happier. Firstly, to exchange for this achievement, they have to work more, less free time for family and friends beside competitive pressures that will drive them tired and bored. Secondly, in order to priority for economic development, entertainment works will be replaced by factories, enterprise that will impact negatively on environment, affect on citizens’s psychophysiology.
Other people think that further economic development will make citizens happier. Because Government will pay more attention on enrich the spiritual life for citizens when they have plentiful financial resource such as build entertainment places, organize cultural festivals or set up luxury resorts…that help citizens to get out stresses in weekend holidays. Besides that, healthcare for citizens will be priority and free completely then they do not need to worry about hospital fees. And government will focus on improving life environment, making advantaged conditions for citizens to live closely with nature, getting out criminal to keep people in safety and peace.
In conclusion, it is normal for citizens in rich countries to have full conveniences. They will not feel happy if they get more facilities in further economy development but their free time for family and friends with other spiritual lives such as attention, sharing from their relatives.

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The economic development will increase the living standard of citizens and make them comfortable but it will be not sure, if they feel happier when they get further money because happiness depends on other factors in the life.

Of course, it is so great for citizens to live in rich countries. Thanks to abundant reserve budget, citizens in these countries will not deal with lack of food or disease without healthcare like underdeveloped nations, they also are met all demands of enjoy facilities and infrastructures then make they can feel relaxed and happy. However, further economic development cannot make people be happier. Firstly, to exchange for this achievement, they have to work more, less free time for family and friends beside competitive pressures that will drive them tired and bored. Secondly, in order to prioritize for economic development, entertainment works will be replaced by factories, enterprises that will impact negatively on the environment, affecting on citizens’s psychophysiology.

Other people think that further economic development will make citizens happier. Because Government will pay more attention on to enriching the spiritual life for citizens when they have plentiful financial resource such as building entertainment places, organizing cultural festivals or setting up luxury resorts…that help citizens to get out stresses on weekend holidays. Besides that, healthcare for citizens will be top priority and free completely free then they do not need to worry about hospital fees. And government will focus on improving life living environment, making advantaged conditions for citizens to live closely with nature, getting out criminals to keep people in safety and peace. In conclusion, it is normal for citizens in rich countries to have full conveniences. They will not feel happy if they get more facilities in further economy development but their free time for family and friends with other spiritual lives such as attention, sharing from their relatives???.

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