Time : 2020-07-17 01:48:28
Điểm: 7/10
It believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Each view will have difference advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, if I were a teacher in secondary school, I will choose the second view because the following reasons.
Firstly, student in secondary school is too young to understand deep and clearly about the world. Especially, there are many information in the world updated day by day. Students can easily to find them on the internet, TV,...if they want. Secondly, the amount of subjects in class so big. students should concentrate on studying Math, English, biology,.... and so on. in the other view, international news will help the children have more knowledge around the world. students can enrich their experience and broaden their horizon. Maybe, it also helps them develop ability to analyse sophisticated situations.we can not refuse advantages that international news bring us.
in conclusion, it will be better to understanding of the world instead of adding international news as compulsory subject in the curriculum of secondary school

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It is believed that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Each view will have different advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, if I were a teacher in secondary school, I would choose the second view because of the following reasons.

Firstly, students in secondary school is are too young to understand deeply and clearly about the world. Especially, there are much information in the world updated day by day. Students can easily to find them on the internet, TV,...if they want. Secondly, the amount of subjects in class is so big. students should concentrate on studying Math, English, biology,.... and so on. in the other view, international news will help the children have more knowledge around the world. students can enrich their experience and broaden their horizon. Maybe, it also helps them develop ability to analyse sophisticated situations.we cannot refuse advantages that international news brings us.

in conclusion, it will be better to gain the understanding of the world instead of adding international news as a compulsory subject in the curriculum of secondary schools.

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