Time : 2020-07-18 08:55:23
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There are opposite ideas that whether schools should teach international news for students as a compulsory subject. Some ones consider that it would be good for childrent however others think that there’s a waste of time.

It is true that students should be taught global news due to the fact that they are living in the industry 4.0 which information spread in a connected world. If schools limit education on scope of geopraphy that means it will also restrict childrent’s knowledge. The world changes everyday along with the development of technology. Students should update everything happening to catch up with the trend of society. Since then they would have a new growth mindset and not be behind the times.

Besides, others believe that additional subjects as international news it would increase more stress to students. It would has negative effect on mental health of students when they have to spend more time on their education. Current subjects also take up a lot of time so that students do not time for other activities even relaxation. In addition, people consider students should focus on their speciality rather than extra subjects. After graduation, students will only use knowledge relating to their jobs. Thus, it is waste time spending so much time for extra subjects.

For me, international news is unnecessary teaching at school to reduce stress on studens but they should study more to update information and catch up with the trend of society.

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There are opposite ideas that whether schools should teach international news for students as a compulsory subject. Some ones consider that it would be good for childrent; however, others think that there’s it’s a waste of time.

It is true that students should be taught global news due to the fact that they are living in the industry 4.0 era when which information spreads in a connected world. If schools limit education on scope of geography that means it will also restrict childrent’s knowledge. The world changes every day along with the development of technology. Students should update everything happening to catch up with the trend of society. Since then So they would have a new growth mindset and not be behind the times.

Besides, others believe that additional subjects as international news it would increase more stress to students. It would have negative effects on mental health of students when they have to spend more time on their education. Current subjects also take up a lot of time so that students do not have time for other activities even relaxation. In addition, people consider students should focus on their speciality major rather than extra subjects. After graduation, students will only use knowledge relating to their jobs. Thus, it is a waste of time spending so much time for extra subjects.

For me, international news is unnecessary to teaching at school to reduce stress on students, but they should study more to update information and catch up with the trend of society.

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