Time : 2020-07-16 21:09:15
Điểm: 7/10
Lately, there are a lot of discussion about whether to teach international news as a subject at school. Some people believe that they should be taught at school while others think that this would be a waste of valuable school time. And in order to figure out the best way to solve this problem, we have to take a much more closer look about international news.

First, what does international news benefit us? Well, they help us know more about the outside world, help us to get along with the world, which is one of the basics you need to have to be success in this world. Read news often not only helps you to know what is happening at the moment but it also gives you many useful tips too. So where can we read international news? Well, there are a lot of famous website such as DanTri, VnExpress, ... in Vietnam, and BBC, FoxNews,... if you want to read news written in English.

Despite its great benefits, international news is something that should not be taught for students now. First, it's because of the school curriculum. There won't be enough time for us to teach international news when there are a lot of subjects for students to learn. Second, we don't have enough basic equipments to students. And also, news are abundant. We will be lost in the matrix of news. There are news everyday, in everytime, every moment. We just can't have a perfect curriculum to this subject.

In this 4.0 technology age, international news are very important to everyone, even for students to keep in touch with what is happening at the moment. But teaching it at school is not really fit. Instead of teaching it, we can have a speech about the importance of it sometimes at school and show them the way so that they can watch and read international news at home in their free time without wasting their precious school time. Also, teachers should check their students regularly to check if they had read international news or not. That would be the perfect way to create the best way to solve this problem.

Finally, international news are very important to students, but teaching it to students will not fit. But if we don't do anything, the children won't know what is happening. So we have to combine this two together in order to build a better future for children.

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Lately, there are a lot of discussions about whether to teach international news as a subject at school. Some people believe that they should be taught at school while others think that this would be a waste of valuable school time. And in order to figure out the best way to solve this problem, we have to take a much more closer look about international news.

First, what does international news benefit us? Well, they help us know more about the outside world, help us to get along with the world, which is one of the basics you need to have to be successful in this world. Reading news often not only helps you to know what is happening at the moment but it also gives you many useful tips too. So where can we read international news? Well, there are a lot of famous websites such as DanTri, VnExpress, ... in Vietnam, and BBC, FoxNews,... if you want to read news written in English.

Despite its great benefits, international news is something that should not be taught for students now. First, it's because of the school curriculum. There won't be enough time for us to teach international news when there are a lot of subjects for students to learn. Second, we don't have enough basic equipments to for students. And also, news are is abundant. We will be lost in the matrix of news. There are is news every day, in every time, every moment. We just can't have a perfect curriculum to for this subject.

In this 4.0 technology age, international news are is very important to everyone, even for students to keep in touch with what is happening at the moment. But teaching it at school is not really fit. Instead of teaching it, we can have a speech about the its importance of it sometimes at school and show them the way so that they can watch and read international news at home in their free time without wasting their precious school time. Also, teachers should check their students regularly to check if they had read international news or not. That would be the perfect way to create the best way to solve this problem.

Finally, international news are is very important to students, but teaching it to students will not fit. But if we don't do anything, the children won't know what is happening. So we have to combine this two together in order to build a better future for children.

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