Time : 2020-07-21 23:04:40
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They said that nowadays international news should be a subject that students learn at school, others do not agree and say it would only be a waste of time. Talking about this discussion, it is true that both views have their own advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will give my personal opinion about these two points of view.

First of all, it is understandable that international news does offer a lot of benefits to students. The world we are living in is developing day by day and for sure that knowledge taught at school is not up to date. In this case, teaching international news provides students with the latest information, which helps them to develop their knowledge in a better and faster method. For example, news about Covid-19 helps students know more about how to keep themselves away from this sickness by wearing face masks and washing hands frequently. Besides, some news about global pollution can raise readers’ awareness and motivate them to protect the environment.

On the other hand, it should be reminded that international news does have its downsides. Fake news can be one of those problems when teachers do not know where their sources come from. Add to that is the fact that most news is not suitable for young minds, they are just not ready for it. Like some news related to war and politician is not ideal lessons for their children to learn, which can definitely corrupt those innocent minds

After explaining thoroughly both sides, I personally will choose the agreement to international news as it is becoming more important to be up to date. Meanwhile, I do agree it would be a safer choice when choosing not to include it as the main subject at school

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They said that nowadays international news should be a subject that students learn at school, others do not agree and say it would only be a waste of time. Talking about this discussion, it is true that both views have their own advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will give my personal opinion about these two points of view.

First of all, it is understandable that international news does offer a lot of benefits to students. The world we are living in is developing day by day and for sure that knowledge taught at school is not up to date. In this case, teaching international news provides students with the latest information, which helps them to develop their knowledge in a better and faster method. For example, news about Covid-19 helps students know more about how to keep themselves away from this sickness by wearing face masks and washing hands frequently. Besides, some news about global pollution can raise readers’ awareness and motivate them to protect the environment.

On the other hand, it should be reminded noted that international news does have its downsides. Fake news can be one of those problems when teachers do not know where their sources come from. Add to that is the fact that most news is not suitable for young minds, they are just not ready for it. Like some news related to war and politics is not ideal lessons for their children to learn, which because it can definitely corrupt those innocent minds.

After explaining thoroughly both sides, I personally will choose the agreement to international news as it is becoming more important to be up to date. Meanwhile, I do agree it would be a safer choice when choosing not to include it as the main subject at school

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