Time : 2020-07-07 09:01:19
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According to some people’s opinion, charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others believe that these ones should give assistance to people from all over the world who are in great need. From my point of view, charity organizations provide aid to people living in their country or not, greatly depends on their funds rich or poor.
Firstly, these days, there are a lot of NGOs in each country and they mostly help people in their countries. We can’t blame them on not helping others from other countries because they don’t have enough money and human resources to come to different areas and give aid to them. Also, they are not large organizations so it’s very difficult for them to access to poor situations. On the other hand, there are nowadays many charities which are willing to help people in need wherever they live. For example, the United Nations International Children’s Funds, or the UNICEF for short, is a global charity organization which aim to aid children worldwide for their better living conditions. Anually, this organization is contributed millions of dollars from countries in the world, especially from rich ones, helping the funds become full and the managers will send them to the poor children who are living in any part of the world. Moreover, there are several endowments having backing of developed countries and they have the responsibility of helping the needies.
In a nutshell, charities should work with the objective of helping people having difficult life with the lack of everything and making our world better. However, they help the poors in their countries or in other ones, it heavily depends on their operate conditions.

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According to some people’s opinion, charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others believe that these ones should give assistance to people from all over the world who are in great need. From my point of view, that charity organizations provide aid to people living in their countries or beyond not, greatly depends on their funds rich or poor.

Firstly, these days, there are a lot of NGOs in each country and they mostly help people in their countries. We can’t blame them on not helping others from other countries because they don’t have enough money and human resources to come go to different areas and give aid to them. Also, they are not large organizations so it’s very difficult for them to access to poor situations. On the other hand, there are nowadays many charities which are willing to help people in need wherever they live. For example, the United Nations International Children’s Funds, or the UNICEF for short, is a global charity organization which aims to aid children worldwide for their better living conditions. Annually, this organization is contributed receive millions of dollars from countries in the world, especially from rich ones, helping the funds become full and the managers will send them to the poor children who are living in any part of the world. Moreover, there are several endowments having backing of developed countries and they have the responsibility of helping the needy.

In a nutshell, charities should work with the objective of helping people having difficult life with the lack of everything and making our world better. However, whether they help the poors in their countries or in other ones, it heavily depends on their operating conditions.

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