Time : 2020-07-07 17:06:12
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Many people believe that charity organizations should give supports to other citizens around the world while others think these organizations should deal only with inhabitants in their own countries. From my point of view, it is true to concentrate on their people, but I also believe that it is possible to help all residents in other countries.


To begin with, there are some reasons why charity management should only support their citizens. Firstly, systems should only pay attention and accept their people’s covets since the administration would strengthen citizen's trust in the governing systems. For example, the US has enacted some policies for helping unemployment received subventions during the outbreak of Covid-19. If they would not admit the desires of the people, their citizens would disbelieve and disappointed in regimes. Secondly, authorities need to concentrate on developing country’s economies such as creating jobs, solving unemployment, protecting civilians from famine, preventing environmental degradation. After solving these problems, these nations would become wealthy countries and has enough abilities to help other people in the world. If they could not deal with these problems, they always would be old-fashioned countries.

However, I would persuade that we also can support the poor from the others in the world through nonprofit organizations such as World Health Global or United Nations International Children's Emergency Fund if governments were able to provide reliefs. For instance, America has aided Vietnam with $4,5 million during the pandemic of Covid-19.

In conclusion, while organizations support citizens around the world can be beneficial, it also has several drawbacks.

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Many people believe that charity organizations should give supports to other citizens around the world while others think these organizations should deal only with inhabitants in their own countries. From my point of view, it is true to concentrate on their people, but I also believe that it is possible to help all residents in other countries.

To begin with, there are some reasons why charity management should only support their citizens. Firstly, systems should only pay attention and accept their people’s covets??? since the administration would strengthen citizens trust in the governing systems. For example, the US has enacted some policies for helping unemployment received with subventions during the outbreak of Covid-19. If they would did not admit the desires of the people, their citizens would disbelieve and be disappointed in regimes. Secondly, authorities need to concentrate on developing country’s economies such as creating jobs, solving unemployment, protecting civilians from famine, preventing environmental degradation. After solving these problems, these nations would become wealthy countries and has enough abilities to help other people in the world. If they could not deal with these problems, they always would be old-fashioned underdeveloped countries.

However, I would persuade argue that we also can support the poor from the others nations in the world through nonprofit organizations such as World Health Global or United Nations International Children's Emergency Fund if governments were able to provide reliefs. For instance, America has aided Vietnam with $4.5 million during the pandemic of Covid-19.

In conclusion, while organizations supporting citizens around the world can be beneficial, it also has several drawbacks.

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