Time : 2020-07-04 22:13:04
Điểm: 8/10
Charity work mostly comes from the loving heart who just wish to share and help the unlucky people wherever they live and whoever they are. However, charity organizations often reserve aid to people in their own countries first.
People believe the charity organizations should be priority to help the unlucky people in their own countries because charity fund and contribution comes from citizens in own countries. Firstly, how these organizations can call charity fund from domestic communities when they ignore the pitiable circumstances disclosing in front of their eyes. The charity fund mostly is contributed from domestic benefators who wish the charity organizations to take care of the poor people in their own communities first through significant activities such as support essential commodities for poor patients, bringing up orphans, helpless old persons. After that, the model will be replicated everywhere. Secondly, the charity organizations should arrange and implement the charity works in communities in order to encourage all people join in. The humanization of charity work always has a spread power strong but it should start from local communities first.
On other hand, giving aid to people in great need wherever they live must be the best option because these offers always bring extreme significant mean for both receivers and givers. It makes givers very satisfied when their offers are used for right purpose while the receivers need these supports to save their life, help them to overcome the lamentable situation. I agree that charity organizations should help all people who are dealing with critical situations no matter where they live. Benevolence should be putted in the right place, do not lend a hand to lazy people.
In conclusion, charity works should not discriminate against anybody. Depend on budget of charity fund and circumstances of people in great need of helping, the charity organization can decide how or what they should give aid to them.

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Charity work mostly comes from the loving heart who just wish to share and help the unlucky people wherever they live and whoever they are. However, charity organizations often reserve aid to people in their own countries first.

People believe the charity organizations should be priority to help the unlucky people in their own countries because charity fund and contribution comes from citizens in their own countries. Firstly, how can these organizations can call charity fund from domestic communities when they ignore the pitiable circumstances disclosing in front of their eyes? The charity fund mostly is contributed from domestic benefactors who wish the charity organizations to take care of the poor people in their own communities first through significant activities such as supporting essential commodities for poor patients, bringing up orphans, helpless old people persons. After that, the model will be replicated everywhere. Secondly, the charity organizations should arrange and implement the charity works in communities in order to encourage all people to join in. The humanization of charity work always has a spread power strong but it should start from local communities first.

On the other hand, giving aid to people in great need wherever they live must be the best option because these offers always bring extremely significant meaning for both receivers and givers. It makes givers very satisfied when their offers are used for right purposes while the receivers need these supports to save their life, help them to overcome the lamentable situation. I agree that charity organizations should help all people who are dealing with critical miserable situations no matter where they live. Benevolence should be putted in the right place, do not lend a hand to lazy people.

In conclusion, charity works should not discriminate against anybody. Depending on the budget of charity fund and circumstances of people in great need of helping, the charity organizations can decide how or what they should give aid to them.

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