Time : 2020-06-21 08:35:15
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It is believe that oral communication is more effective than written communication. From my perspective, i partly agree with this statement. Because i think it is base on particular circumstances to do the best choices.
We need spoken communication to transfer information directly. For example, after a long time dating, you need express your deep love by speaking. Even though you have a lot of sincere actions, your girlfriend still want to hear romantic words as a way to affirm how you love her.Another good example of this kinds of communication is that to set up a face to face appointment. It is really necessary when you have a business relationship with someone. It helps you understand that person and issues more clearly and brings you true emotions which can't be replaced by some written messages.
However, written communication also plays an important part in our life. One good example of this kind of communication is its convenience. When you send messages to your customers, you may find it easily than meeting each person to talk about products. It saves time and brings high efficiency. In addition, in some serious cases, standing in front of the court, it requires necessary documents if you want to present something. Even when in your business,you also need text form.For instance, you may need multiples copies of a notification to inform it to your employees quickly and effectively.
To summarize, we can't say which communication is more powerful. We should depend on specific circumstances to choose a suitable communication.

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It is believed that oral communication is more effective than written communication. From my perspective, i partly agree with this statement. Because i think it is based on particular circumstances to do the best choices.

We need spoken communication to transfer information directly. For example, after a long time dating, you need to express your deep love by speaking. Even though you have a lot of sincere actions, your girlfriend still wants to hear romantic words as a way to affirm how you love her.Another good example of this kinds of communication is that to set up a face to face appointment. It is really necessary when you have a business relationship with someone. It helps you understand that person and issues more clearly and brings you true emotions which can't be replaced by some written messages.

However, written communication also plays an important part in our life. One good example of this kind of communication is its convenience. When you send messages to your customers, you may find it easier than meeting each person to talk about products. It saves time and brings high efficiency. In addition, in some serious cases, standing in front of the court, it requires necessary documents if you want to present something. Even when in your business,you also need text written form.For instance, you may need multiples copies of a notification to inform it to your employees quickly and effectively.

To summarize, we can't say which communication is more powerful. We should depend on specific circumstances to choose a suitable communication.

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