Time : 2020-06-18 19:11:52
Điểm: 8/10
Many people nowadays believe that oral communication is more effective than written communication. In my opinion, I somewhat agree with this idea. I believe that both spoken and written communication have their own benefits.
Firstly, in some situations that require body language and facial expressions to communicate there are several advantages. Talking face to face makes people close to each other because it can express a lot of emotions and people can express their feelings. For example, when people watch a comedy, they can laugh out loud or when people are dating, they can express feelings to their partners. As a result, people can understand each other better.
Conversely, written communication also has an advantage in some situations. In the law, words have no power and all decisions must have a written document. Moreover, in business when people need to discuss some issues with their partners, a written communication will provide more information and clearer communication. It is more convenient and faster and also helps people save time to find partners in some unnecessary situations.
To conclude as I mentioned above, I think the advantages of spoken and written communication depend on the specific situation.

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Many people nowadays believe that oral communication is more effective than written communication. In my opinion, I somewhat agree with this idea. I believe that both spoken and written communication have their own benefits.

Firstly, in some situations that require body language and facial expressions to communicate there are several advantages. Talking face to face makes people close to each other because it can express a lot of emotions and people can express their feelings. For example, when people watch a comedy, they can laugh out loud or when people are dating, they can express feelings to their partners. As a result, people can understand each other better.

Conversely, written communication also has an advantage in some situations. In the law, words have no power and all decisions must have a written document. Moreover, in business when people need to discuss some issues with their partners, a written communication will provide more information and clearer communication. It is more convenient and faster and also helps people save time to find partners in some unnecessary situations.

To conclude as I mentioned above, I think the advantages of spoken and written communication depend on the specific situation.

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