Time : 2020-06-19 23:09:05
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Some people believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. But for me, I think that it all depends on the situation to decide which mode of communication is more important than the other.
When it comes to situations that require body language and facial expressions, spoken words are better than written ones. Dating is an excellent example of this. Of course it is better if you set up a directly meeting to date your lover than just texting to them online. You will know the real feeling of the person you love if you meet face-to-face, but if you are just texting, you will never know what are they thinking about you. That person can say sweet-sentences just to scam your money and love.
But, if you want to apply a job, written communication is a better choice. You need formal essay to make the boss of that company have good feeling about you. I think writting an formal application or letter is a lot easier than a face-to-face meeting because when you write the application, you have a lot of time to think about the sentences so you can write a perfect letter. If your boss want to have a face-to-face interview, of course you can prepare for the interview but sometimes, the pressure for you is too high and you could be panic and you could forget the answer you have prepared
So, to conclude, I think both spoken communication and written communication have both advantages and disadvantages depends on the situation. We should use both of them wisely.

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Some people believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. But for me, I think that it all depends on the situation to decide which mode of communication is more important than the other.

When it comes to situations that require body language and facial expressions, spoken words are better than written ones. Dating is an excellent example of this. Of course it is better if you set up a directly meeting to date your lover than just texting to them online. You will know the real feelings of the person you love if you meet face-to-face, but if you are just texting, you will never know what are they are thinking about you. That person can say sweet-sentences just to scam your money and love.

But, if you want to apply for a job, written communication is a better choice. You need formal essay communication to make the boss of that company have good feeling impression about you. I think writting an formal application or letter is a lot easier than a face-to-face meeting because when you write the application, you have a lot of time to think about the sentences so you can write a perfect letter. If your boss wants to have a face-to-face interview, of course you can prepare for the interview but sometimes, the pressure for you is too high and you could be panic and you could forget the answer you have prepared.

So, to conclude, I think both spoken communication and written communication have both advantages and disadvantages, depending on the situation. We should use both of them wisely.

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