Time : 2020-06-20 22:55:56
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Good communication skill is essential condition lead to success. Depend on the different situations, we will apply the suitable communication ways including spoken and written communication in order to bring the most effect.
Spoken communication is more powerful than written because of its direct interaction into the listeners thought senses combine with body languages while just brain has to work when using written communication. Firstly when speaking, people are in the state of face to face then the listeners not only are influenced by the speakers’s voice but they are also attracted by glint, gestures and behaviors. Then spoken communication will make transferred information become stronger and more persuasion than writing. As we can see, most of politicians have good speaking skills. With rich vocabulary and the smooth expression combine with humored skills and gently body languages, the politician are able to attract the millions audiences on their spoken communication while no much people take their time to read articles. Besides that, tune and voice will be impacted strong and lively on the human brain that make speaker become more powerful.
However not spoken communication always bring successful for speakers. In some cases, using writing to transfer information will be better as it instructs details and give orders that force people to follow up. For example, rules or stipulations in company need to be transferred by writing because no body can remember these messages after few times hearing. Above that, email is the way of written communication so popularly and conveniently. Via email, the receiver can get orders or requests powerful from senders. So that, depend on the specific situation people can choose the best way to communicate in order to get more effects.
In conclusion, spoken communication is not more powerful than written communication but it depends on situation or kind of information. However good speaking skills are supposed as an advantaged factor to get successful in the life.

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Good communication skill is essential condition to lead to success. Depending on the different situations, we will apply the suitable communication ways including spoken and written communication in order to bring the best result most effect.

Spoken communication is more powerful than written one because of its direct interaction into impact on the listeners throught senses combining with body languages while just brain has to work when using written communication. Firstly when speaking, people are in the state of face to face then the listeners not only are influenced by the speakers’s voice but they are also attracted by glint, gestures and behaviors. Then spoken communication will make transferred information become stronger and more persuasive than writing. As we can see, most of politicians have good speaking skills. With rich vocabulary and the smooth expression combining with humored skills a sense of humor and gentle body languages, the politicians are able to attract the millions of audiences on their spoken communication while not many people take their time to read articles. Besides that, tune and voice will be impacted have a strong and lively impact on the human brain that makes the speakers become more powerful.

However not spoken communication does not always bring successful for speakers. In some cases, using written communication to transfer information will be better as it instructs in details and gives orders that force people to follow up. For example, rules or stipulations in a company need to be transferred by writing because nobody can remember these messages after few times just by hearing. Above that, email is the way of written communication which is so popularly and conveniently. Via email, the receiver can easily get orders or requests powerful from senders. So that, depending on the specific situation people can choose the best way to communicate in order to get the best result more effects.

In conclusion, spoken communication is not more powerful than written communication but it depends on situations or kind of information. However, good speaking skills are supposed as an advantaged factor to get gain successful in the life.

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