Time : 2020-06-08 10:24:55
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There are some people are much more head- in- the- clouds romantic and tend to spend a huge sum of money on special occasions such as wedding, ceremonies and birthday parties. However, this consumption habit raises eyebrows of down-to-Earth people. I personally support the former type of money spending and this essay will demonstrate both perspectives and will take the wedding as the case to analyze.

Critics may say that only narcissistic rich kids would want to make big impression by wasting a large amount of money on setting up their personal special events. They are thought to dedicate their life to chasing a mirage of happiness ever after by making their wedding hit the headlines of all tabloid newspapers. It is assumed that all the fantasies will go bye bye immediately since fame and money are never enough to help the romance stand the test of time. Additionally, several girls see workplace as their hunting ground and are willing to do whatever it takes to have people with strong financial background in the cross hair. The question of how long the romance of this rich couple keeps flickering when temptation is all around has been raised. However, people only live once and people die sometimes unexpectedly, if we do not live our life to the fullest and work to the fullest capacity, then surely one day we would regret on our death bed.

Undeniably, money is a very important factor measuring happiness of each individual and there is nothing wrong in spending his own money to make him happy. When a couple mark the start of their new life chapter impressively and unforgettably, they are more likely to have full energy, patience and strong will to adhere to the limitations and would be persisted against all the odds as a couple afterwards. For instance, there is always ups and downs in the marriage life and whenever a person have negative thoughts about their spouse, all good memories of her wedding and the way they did spend money to blow people's mind into confetti that day, would prove to be an asset to their marriage and somehow would help soothe her pain.

In summary, as long as people do not use money which do not belong to others to benefit themselves, they reserve every right to spend it to live a happy life.

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There are some people who are much more head- in- the- clouds romantic and tend to spend a huge sum of money on special occasions such as wedding, ceremonies and birthday parties. However, this consumption habit raises eyebrows of down-to-Earth people. I personally support the former type of money spending and this essay will demonstrate both perspectives and will take the wedding as the case to analyze.

Critics may say that only narcissistic rich kids would want to make big impressions by wasting a large amount of money on setting up their personal special events. They are thought to dedicate their life to chasing a mirage of happiness ever after by making their wedding hit the headlines of all tabloid newspapers. It is assumed that all the fantasies will go bye bye immediately since fame and money are is never enough to help the romance stand the test of time. Additionally, several girls see workplace as their hunting ground and are willing to do whatever it takes to have people with strong financial background in the cross hair. The question of how long the romance of this rich couple keeps flickering when temptation is all around has been raised. However, people only live once and people die sometimes unexpectedly, if we do not live our life to the fullest and work to the fullest capacity, then surely one day we would regret on our death bed.

Undeniably, money is a very important factor measuring happiness of each individual and there is nothing wrong in spending his own money to make him happy. When a couple mark the start of their new life chapter impressively and unforgettably, they are more likely to have full energy, patience and strong will to adhere to the limitations and would be persisted against all the odds as a couple afterwards. For instance, there is are always ups and downs in the marriage life and whenever a person has negative thoughts about their spouse, all good memories of her wedding and the way they did spend money to blow people's mind into confetti that day, would prove to be an asset to their marriage and somehow would help soothe her pain.

In summary, as long as people do not use money which do not belongs to others to benefit themselves, they deserve every right to spend it to live a happy life.

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