Time : 2020-06-09 21:33:20
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Many people are all about holding parties to mark a significant event or to recall memories while others think that it is not necessary to waste of money on celebrations. In my opinion, I profoundly believe that holding parties or celebrations are essential for those who want to keep memories and have fun moments with friends and relatives.
On the one hand, there are many people who do not want to celebrate parties due to their financial burden. For example, when my grandfather and grandmother got married, they did not have enough money to hold a wedding parties. In addition, some of the aged do not want to celebrate birthday parties because of aged obsessions. All of these things may lead to decision that they do not think celebrations are the good choices.
On the second hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for people to hold parties and celebrations. First and foremost, this is the best way for them to maintain the memorable moments. There is no doubt that the more parties they have, the more fun they will have. When they feel depressed, these memorable moments can stimulate their motivation which help them avoid being upset. Secondly, it is not prohibitive to hold parties if they know how to choose a suitable size and form of the parties. Sometimes, a gathering can be considered as a great chance for them to be closer and more sympathetic.
In conclusion, it seems to me that if we have a thorough balance between holding parties and finance, it is indispensable for us to design a charming parties without caring about its disadvantages.

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Many people are all about holding parties to mark a significant event or to recall memories while others think that it is not necessary to waste of money on celebrations. In my opinion, I profoundly believe that holding parties or celebrations are is essential for those who want to keep memories and have fun moments with friends and relatives.

On the one hand, there are many people who do not want to celebrate parties due to their financial burden. For example, when my grandfather and grandmother got married, they did not have enough money to hold a wedding party. In addition, some of the aged do not want to celebrate birthday parties because of aged obsessions. All of these things may lead to the decision that they do not think celebrations are the good choices.

On the second hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for people to hold parties and celebrations. First and foremost, this is the best way for them to maintain the memorable moments. There is no doubt that the more parties they have, the more fun they will have. When they feel depressed, these memorable moments can stimulate their motivation which helps them avoid being upset. Secondly, it is not prohibitive to hold parties if they know how to choose a suitable size and form of the parties. Sometimes, a gathering can be considered as a great chance for them to be closer and more sympathetic.

In conclusion, it seems to me that if we have a thorough balance between holding parties and finance, it is indispensable for us to design a charming parties without caring about its disadvantages.

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