Time : 2021-03-12 14:09:44
Điểm: 7/10
Look at the beautiful picture, I can see five people. Three boys and two girls. They are play tug of war. I also remember that when I was in the age of 5, I usually play this with my friend, this picture had evoked me. They divided into 2 teams: The first team is the two big boys and the other team is two little girls and a boy. Most of them have brown hair and they are wearing jeans. What a coincident! I think they are in the same place to live. But their shirt are not in the same color. Their face look very serious. They are trying to win but no one know the truth. They are holding a white rope and pull off the rope. That is the rule of the tug of war game (if anyone don't know about it). And they are playing in a empty yard. In the yard, there are a lot of grass and surrounded by trees. Maybe it's a peaceful and clean place. That's is a good spot for playing tug of war. That’s all my thinking.Thanks for reading! Goodbye and see you in the next essay! What a beautiful picture!

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Look at the beautiful picture, I can see five people. Three boys and two girls. They are playing tug of war. I also remember that when I was in at the age of 5, I usually play this game with my friends, this picture had evoked me. They are divided into 2 teams: The first team is the has two big boys and the other team is has two little girls and a boy. Most of them have brown hair and they are wearing jeans. What a coincident! I think they are living in the same place to live. But their shirts are not in the same color. Their faces look very serious. They are trying to win but no one knows the truth. They are holding a white rope and pulling off the rope. That is the rule of the tug of war game (if anyone doesn't know about it). And they are playing in an empty yard. In the yard, there are a lot of grass and surrounded by trees. Maybe it's a peaceful and clean place. That's is a good spot for playing tug of war. That’s all my thinking.Thanks for reading! Goodbye and see you in the next essay! What a beautiful picture!

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