Time : 2021-03-11 11:01:24
Điểm: 6/10
hello everyone! i am Quang and today, i will describe about this photo, as you can see it is taken at a small park, i think. the background of it is so nice and cleaning, it have green grass ground, trees which make people more comfortable with it's great atmosphere. beside that the point of the photo are children, they are tugging of war look so funny. they have two team, first is girl team, they have three girls, second is boy team, they have two boys, they are maybe same old. the boy team look so strong, they are probably confident in this game. the girl teams are weaker than a little, all of them have slim body. this picture is meaningful, because the children are usually use their smartphone instead partake outdoor activities

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hello everyone! i am Quang and today, i will describe about this photo, as you can see it is taken at a small park, i think. the background of it is so nice and cleaning, it has a green grass ground, trees which make people more comfortable with it's great atmosphere. beside that the point focus of the photo are children, they are playing tugging of war look so funnily. they have two teams, first one is girls’ team, they have three girls, second one is boys’ team, they have two boys, they are maybe at the same age old. the boys’ team look so strong, they are probably confident in this game. the girls’ teams are weaker than a little, all of them have slim body. this picture is meaningful, because the children are usually use their smartphone instead of partaking part in outdoor activities

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