Time : 2021-03-12 16:12:25
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491_Tug-of-war game
The picture shows children playing tug-of-war in a park that I think is close to their home.
As you know the tug-of-war game has two teams so you can see on the left side of the picture there are two boys and facing them three little girls, one of which is tall and other two are very small. Therefore, I think the boy’s team will have many advantages because this sport require a lot of body and spirit but in my opion, bodybuilding is the most important. So I think the boy’s team will win this match. But I don’t think it’s important, it’s being friendly and cheerful, creating unity in their neighbours.
When I was a child, I really liked tug-of-war. It can be said that playing tug-of-war is a normal sport for children and they all like it, not only in Vietnam but also in many countries around the world. It will help us to have good health, a clear mind and have a good time on hot summer days.
I think they often come to this park to play this game for its benefits and the location is also very convenient. Perhaps this place is more of a city than the countryside because I see many buildings behind them.

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491_Tug-of-war game The picture shows children playing tug-of-war in a park that I think is close to their home. As you know in the tug-of-war game has there are two teams so you can see on the left side of the picture there are two boys and facing them three little girls, one of whom is tall and the other two are very small. Therefore, I think the boy’s team will have more advantages because this sport requires a lot of body and spirit strength but in my opinion, bodybuilding is the most important. So I think the boy’s team will win this match. But I don’t think it’s important, it’s being friendliness and cheerfulness, creating unity in their neighbourhood which is more important. When I was a child, I really liked tug-of-war. It can be said that playing tug-of-war is a normal sport common game for children and they all like it, not only in Vietnam but also in many countries around the world. It will help us to have good health, a clear mind and have a good time on hot summer days. I think they often come to this park to play this game for its benefits and the location is also very convenient. Perhaps this place is more of a city than the countryside because I see many buildings behind them.

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