Time : 2021-03-11 11:02:35
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Tug-of-war is a team sport in which two teams of five players. For safety, the best way to play it is on a large, flat grassy area with no rocks, tree roots or sharp objects. I can see it clearly, because the view in the picture makes me think this photo was taken in an eco-park. Standing on the grass, there are five kids including three boys and two girls. Both of two teams are tugging the rope with their all power like they are joining in a real war. I claim that two boys on the left of the photo older than others. They're the opponent of the team on the right. Trying to pull on the rope as hard as possible, he is a boy in a long-sleeved caro shirt, a light grey jeans and he's the only one wearing black sport shoes. It makes him more good-looking. Standing behind him, is an another boy, who is wearing a short-sleeved blue shirt, and dark blue jeans making him more attractive and nice. He is wearing a pair of white sport shoes as the same as three people left. To be honest, the only child I really fond of is a cute girl. She's dressed in a yellow shirt, dark blue jeans, too. She wore her dark orange hair in bunches. Actually, she is not clearly taken by the picture so I couldn't describe her more. The next one, it's a little boy, with a curly brown hair. He's too thin, I think he should eat a lot to get full nutrition. The last one is a girl in a pinky shirt. She's so pretty, isn't she? The team on the right has consits of three people, they need to try their hardest to get the other team to fall or let go of the rope. All in all, the weather is so wonderful to enjoy some outdoor activities. I really like this picture.

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Tug-of-war is a team sport in which two teams compete of five players . For safety, the best way to play it is on a large, flat grassy area with no rocks, tree roots or sharp objects. I can see it clearly, because the view in the picture makes me think this photo was taken in an eco-park. Standing on the grass, there are five kids including three boys and two girls. Both of two teams are tugging the rope with their all power like they are joining in a real war. I claim that two boys on the left of the photo are older than the others. They're the opponent of the team on the right. Trying to pull on the rope as hard as possible, he is a boy in a long-sleeved caro shirt, a light grey jeans and he's the only one wearing black sport shoes. It makes him more good-looking. Standing behind him is an another boy, who is wearing a short-sleeved blue shirt, and dark blue jeans making him more attractive and nice. He is wearing a pair of white sport shoes as the same as three people left. To be honest, the only child I’m really fond of is a cute girl. She's dressed in a yellow shirt, dark blue jeans, too. She wore her dark orange hair in bunches. Actually, she is not clearly taken by in the picture so I couldn't describe her more. The next one, it's a little boy, with a curly brown hair. He's too thin, I think he should eat a lot to get full nutrition. The last one is a girl in a pinky shirt. She's so pretty, isn't she? The team on the right has consists of three people, they need to try their hardest to get make the other team to fall or let go of the rope. All in all, the weather is so wonderful to enjoy some outdoor activities. I really like this picture.

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