Time : 2021-02-21 20:00:51
Điểm: 8/10
Wow. What's a nice picture. This picture is not so difficult for us to understand and describe it. We can easily see in the picture, there is a woman and she is ironing the clothes.

First, it's very waste if we don't describe the background. So let's take our looks at the background, i mean the room. We can see in the picture, the room there is so modern and clean. And we can see all the furniture in the room is very nice and modern, we can she there is an ironing table, an iron and a aloe vera vase. the iron in the picture, it's not a normal iron, it's a steam iron, it's safe and easy to use than a normal one. And out the room, on the right of the picture, there is a balcony and a white shirt; on the left of the picture is also a balcony and there are some trees there. The weather is very nice, i think it's sunny or warm. That's a pretty weather. How nice the background is.

That's all of the background, now we are going to move to the main of the picture, i mean the woman who is ironing the clothes. What's a beautiful woman. We can easily see that the woman is wearing a white T-shirt which have a picture about the sky on it, a white and blue overcoat and jeans. She is tall and thin, also very slim. She has a brown and blond hair, and her hair is a little long. She is smiling when ironing a clothes. I think she is ironing her husband's clothes because she is enough old to be a wife and a mother, i think so.

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Wow. What's a nice picture. This picture is not too difficult for us to understand and describe it. We can easily see in the picture, there is a woman and she is ironing the clothes.

First, it's very waste a pity if we don't describe the background. So let's take our looks at the background, i mean the room. We can see in the picture, the room there is so modern and clean. And we can see all the furniture in the room is very nice and modern, we can see there is an ironing table, an iron and an aloe vera pot vase. the iron in the picture, it's not a normal iron, it's a steam iron, it's safe and easy to use than a normal one. And out of the room, on the right of the picture, there is a balcony and a white shirt; on the left of the picture is also a balcony and there are some trees there. The weather is very nice, i think it's sunny or warm. That's a pretty weather. How nice the background is.

That's all of the background, now we are going to move to the main character of the picture, i mean the woman who is ironing the clothes. What's a beautiful woman. We can easily see that the woman is wearing a white T-shirt which has a picture about of the sky on it, a white and blue overcoat and jeans. She is tall and thin, also very slim. She has a brown and blond hair, and her hair is a little long. She is smiling when ironing a clothes. I think she is ironing her husband's clothes because she is enough old enough to be a wife and a mother, i think so.

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