Time : 2021-02-21 15:51:54
Điểm: 7/10
Iron clothes by model electric iron make the girl feel comfortable because of its convenience. The iron table is arranged near the big glass door of balcony where is full of sunlight. The girl looks so beautiful in blue t-shirt inside dark blue coat match with oval face and short blonde hair. Stretching the clothes on the iron table with right hand keeping the grey clothes, she is running the electric iron to remove all wrinkles on her clothes. It must be the second clothes after she finished iron the white shirt that is being hanged on the clothes hanger. The girl doesn’t feel tired or bored at this housework because she can listen to music while doing.

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Ironing clothes by model with an electric iron makes the girl feel comfortable because of its convenience. The ironing board table is arranged near the big glass door of the balcony where there is full of sunlight. The girl looks so beautiful in a blue t-shirt inside a dark blue coat matching with an oval face and short blonde hair. Stretching the clothes on the ironing board table with the right hand keeping the grey clothes, she is running moving the electric iron to remove all wrinkles on her clothes. It must be the second clothes after she finished ironing the white shirt that is being hanged hung on the clothes hanger. The girl doesn’t feel tired or bored at this housework because she can listen to music while doing.

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7.5/10