Time : 2020-07-11 15:49:45
Điểm: 8/10
Looking in the picture, the first view is the clear blue sky with just a few flying clouds. The weather sure is very hot and windy! In the picture, there are 2 people, a man and a small boy whose I think is a father with his son flying the kite together. The father is helping his son to hold and fly the colourful kite up in the air. They are flying the kite in a grassy field with just some trees around and the seemingly endless grassland hunting up in the wind. Both the son and his dad is wearing summer clothes: a pair of shorts and a blue T-shirt for the father and a yellow one for the son. I'm sure this kind of clothes will keep them cool and enjoy the mild wind as much as they want while flying the kite. I think this is a very nice picture!

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Looking in at the picture, the first view is the clear blue sky with just a few flying clouds. The weather sure is very hot and windy! In the picture, there are 2 people, a man and a small boy whose I think is a father with his son flying the kite together. The father is helping his son to hold and fly the colourful kite up in the air. They are flying the kite in a grassy field with just some trees around and the seemingly endless grassland hunting up in the wind. Both the son and his dad is are wearing summer clothes: a pair of shorts and a blue T-shirt for the father and a yellow one for the son. I'm sure this kind of clothes will keep them cool and enjoy the mild wind as much as they want while flying the kite. I think this is a very nice picture!

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