Time : 2020-07-10 12:35:37
Điểm: 9/10
This is a beautiful picture, or peaceful picture. I don't know how to call it exactly, but I really like it. As you see, there is a man with a boy. I think the man is father, and the boy is his son, and their family is having a summer vacation together. I don't see the mother, maybe she is staying in the hotel and cooking meals, maybe maybe=))) OK, now looking at the father, he is wearing a blue T-shirt with a pair of shorts. I think he is over 30 years old already. He's tall and has brown hair. He has a fit body, not too fat like the other men at the same age, perhaps because he like doing outdoor activities. We can't see all his face, but I am sure that he's good-looking=))) Next to him is his son, about 10 years old. He is wearing a yellow T-shirt, and a pair of shorts like his father. He also has white skin and brown hair. In his age, I think his height is OK, and his body is also healthy. He and his father is standing on a large green farm and I see green everywhere: trees and grass. The sky is blue with many big cloud. They are flying a colourful kite. It's orange, green, bule, red and has a yellow tail. I don't know how to call ''đuôi diều'' exactly, ''tail'', ''rear'',....oh nevermind. I just know this is a cute kite, and it makes the sky more beautiful. In short, this is a beautiful picture about a healthy summer vacation, and we can learn some interesting lessons from this pic: Is you want a fit body, you must do more and more outdoor activities, like flying kite=)))

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This is a beautiful picture, or peaceful picture. I don't know how to call it exactly, but I really like it. As you see, there is a man with a boy. I think the man is father, and the boy is his son, and their family is having a summer vacation together. I don't see the mother, maybe she is staying in the hotel and cooking meals, maybe maybe=))) OK, now looking at the father, he is wearing a blue T-shirt with a pair of shorts. I think he is over 30 years old already. He's tall and has brown hair. He has a fit body, not too fat like the other men at the same age, perhaps because he likes doing outdoor activities. We can't see all his face, but I am sure that he's good-looking=))) Next to him is his son, about 10 years old. He is wearing a yellow T-shirt, and a pair of shorts like his father. He also has white skin and brown hair. In his age, I think his height is OK, and his body is also healthy. He and his father is are standing on a large green farm and I see green everywhere: trees and grass. The sky is blue with many big clouds. They are flying a colourful kite. It's orange, green, blue, red and has a yellow tail. I don't know how to call ''đuôi diều'' exactly, ''tail'', ''rear'',....oh never mind. I just know this is a cute kite, and it makes the sky more beautiful. In short, this is a beautiful picture about a healthy summer vacation, and we can learn some interesting lessons from this pic: If you want a fit body, you must do more and more outdoor activities, like flying a kite=)))

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