Time : 2020-07-12 16:39:58
Điểm: 8/10
458_Fly a kite.

The picture shows two people at the countryside, a man and a boy. Perhaps the man is the boy’s father.

The man is wearing a green shirt with a white and gray checkered shorts. He has short blonde hair. Next to, it is a boy wearing a yellow shirt with a white and gray checkered shorts He is wearing a gray baseball cap. They are standing on the grass in their countryside. The father is showing his child how to fly the kite in the air. As you can see, both of them are holding the string to pull and jerk it so it can fly higher. At that time, the kite only flew high about three meters from ground and this was a difficult period while flying a kite so it needed the help of his father. But when the kite flies high, it is very easy, just hold on the string and it will fly forever if the weather is good and windy.

When I was a small child, I like flying kites very much when the summer came. We have to go to the empty places without a home or to the beach to fly kites. It can be said that flying kite is a normal sport for children that all like it, not only in Vietnam but also in many countries around the world. It helps us to relax and have fun in the hot summer day, besides it will help us to have good health and a clear mind.

I still remember my kite flying days, it was great

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458_Fly a kite. The picture shows two people at the countryside, a man and a boy. Perhaps the man is the boy’s father. The man is wearing a green shirt with a white and gray checkered shorts. He has short blonde hair. Next to him, it is a boy wearing a yellow shirt with a white and gray checkered shorts He is wearing a gray baseball cap. They are standing on the grass in their countryside. The father is showing his child how to fly the kite in the air. As you can see, both of them are holding the string to pull and jerk it so it can fly higher. At that time, the kite only flew high about three meters high from ground and this was a difficult period while flying a kite so it he needed the help of his father. But when the kite flies high, it is very easy, just hold on the string and it will fly forever if the weather is good and windy. When I was a small child, I liked flying kites very much when the summer came. We have to go to the empty places without a home or to the beach to fly kites. It can be said that flying a kite is a normal sport for children that and they all like it, not only in Vietnam but also in many countries around the world. It helps us to relax and have fun in the hot summer day, besides it will help us to have good health and a clear mind. I still remember my kite flying those days flying kites, it was great

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