Time : 2020-07-12 10:51:00
Điểm: 9/10
Hi everyone, I am Ha My. My nickname is my5athdc ! Glad to see you again ! Today, as usual, I'll describe the picture above- The picture 458. Hope you'll give me a high mark. Thank you. Ok, let's start. What an awesome picture! It attracts me at the first sight. From this photo, it is not too difficult for us to understand what it is about. As we can see, there is a man and a child. I guess the man is father and that is his son. The father is wearing a blue T-shirt and checked shorts. He has brown hair and brown complextion. His son is wearing a yellow T-shirt and checked shorts, too. He has blonde hair and fair complextion.They are flying their kite. What a colorful kite! The sky is blue and bright. There are many big clouds over there. There are a lot of sunshine and wind so the kite is flying very high. Those are plenty of grass and trees around them. Look at their emotion,they are very happy. They are talking very merrily. Oops, I have to go now. And now, it's the end of my description. I had lots of fun today. What a nice photo! Thanks for reading and see you next time. Mwah, I love you guys , bye.

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Hi everyone, I am Ha My. My nickname is my5athdc ! Glad to see you again ! Today, as usual, I'll describe the picture above- The picture 458. Hope you'll give me a high mark. Thank you. Ok, let's start. What an awesome picture! It attracts me at the first sight. From this photo, it is not too difficult for us to understand what it is about. As we can see, there is a man and a child. I guess the man is father and that is his son. The father is wearing a blue T-shirt and checkered shorts. He has brown hair and brown complextion. His son is wearing a yellow T-shirt and checkered shorts, too. He has blonde hair and fair complextion.They are flying their kite. What a colorful kite! The sky is blue and bright. There are many big clouds over there. There are is a lot of sunshine and wind so the kite is flying very high. Those are plenty of grass and trees around them. Look at their emotion,they are very happy. They are talking very merrily. Oops, I have to go now. And now, it's the end of my description. I had lots of fun today. What a nice photo! Thanks for reading and see you next time. Mwah, I love you guys , bye.

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