Time : 2020-07-11 20:48:28
Điểm: 8/10
In this picture, I see two people: a little brother and and a big brother. They are flying a kite, looks pretty fun, isn't it? The little brother is very short. He is wearing blue shorts and a normal yellow T - shirt. He is quite bald because I see a little bunch of blonde hair on his head. He only holds the bottom of the kite because he is so short! The bigger brother looks gentle, kind and smart. He wears white shorts with black and grey stirpes on his shorts. He wears a blue T - shirt with no decorates on his T - shirt. He is tall enough to hold the top of the kite so it could fly well. He is taller than me actually because he is high grade! He has black hair. Also, the kite is very beautiful. It looks like a diamond, with red, blue, orange, yellow and green colors in it. The kite is very big and wide, it also have a green string at the bottom of it. The grass field is very clear. Under the sunshine and the grasses rise. There are some plenty bushes in the field, it all just feel like a countryside life. The sky is very clear, just a little bit of clouds in the sky. Anyways, I'm done with my writing, goodbye!

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In this picture, I see two people: a little brother and and a big brother. They are flying a kite, looks pretty fun, isn't it right? The little brother is very short. He is wearing blue shorts and a normal yellow T - shirt. He is quite bald because I see a little bunch of blonde hair on his head. He only holds the bottom of the kite because he is so short! The bigger brother looks gentle, kind and smart. He wears white shorts with black and grey stripes on his shorts. He wears a blue T - shirt with no decorations on his T - shirt. He is tall enough to hold the top of the kite so it could fly well. He is taller than me actually because he is high grade! He has black hair. Also, the kite is very beautiful. It looks like a diamond, with red, blue, orange, yellow and green colors in it. The kite is very big and wide, it also has a green string at the bottom of it. The grass field is very clean. Under the sunshine and the grasses rise. There are some plenty bushes in the field, it all just feels like a countryside life. The sky is very clear, just a little bit of clouds in the sky. Anyways, I'm done with my writing, goodbye!

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8.5/10