Time : 2020-07-05 18:01:33
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457_Practice cycling.

The picture shows two people at the park, a woman and a little girl. Perhaps the woman is her mother.

The woman is wearing a blue and red checkered shirt with jeans. She has short blonde hair. Next to it was the little girl sitting on the road, she’s wearing a pink coat and jeans. She is wearing a green bicycle helmet. Maybe this was the first time she practiced cycling and today she fell. As you can see, she is crying and covering her face with her hands. She had a scratch on her elbow and the spot is often very painful. Her mother walked beside her as she practiced cycling and quickly came to her and blew into the hurt on her elbow as if to ease the pain.

Cycling practice is a normal task for children. It helps them to be able to ride safely later, besides it will help them to have good health and a clear mind.

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457_Practice cycling. The picture shows two people at the park, a woman and a little girl. Perhaps the woman is her mother. The woman is wearing a blue and red checkered shirt with jeans. She has short blonde hair. Next to it her was the little girl sitting on the road, she’s wearing a pink coat and jeans. She is wearing a green bicycle helmet. Maybe this was the first time she practiced cycling and today she fell. As you can see, she is crying and covering her face with her hands. She had a scratch on her elbow and the spot is often very painful. Her mother walked beside her as she practiced cycling and quickly came to her and blew into the hurt on her elbow as if to ease the pain. Cycling practice is a normal task for children. It helps them to be able to ride safely later, besides it will help them to have good health and a clear mind.

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