Time : 2020-07-02 13:22:55
Điểm: 9/10
Wow! What a beautiful photo! It attracts me at first sight. It is not too difficult to understand what this photo is about.

As we can see, there are two people including a woman and a girl. The photo is great because of its green background. I think the woman is the girl's mother. They are sitting on the road.

And now look at the cute girl. She is wearing a pink shirt and jeans. I think pink is her favorite color. She is covering her face. I think she is wiping the tears from her painful expression. I guess she fell down while she was riding a bike. The bicycle crash must be painful as she is crying a lot now. She is wearing a yellow helmet which prevents her from being injured. If she doesn't wear the helmet, she will break the head and she might go to the hospital for treatment. Maybe this is the first time she's riding a bike. And now, look at the women.

As we can see, the woman is blowing on the wound of the little girl for pain relief. She has yellow hair and an oval face. She is wearing a colorful shirt and jeans. Her hands are holding the girl's right hand. This photo reminds me of the first time I learned how to ride the bike. I fell a lot but I could stand up and continued riding. I really like this because it's very beautiful and helps me learn a lot of things.

Bye. See you again.

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Wow! What a beautiful photo! It attracts me at first sight. It is not too difficult to understand what this photo is about. As we can see, there are two people including a woman and a girl. The photo is great because of its green background. I think the woman is the girl's mother. They are sitting on the road. And now look at the cute girl. She is wearing a pink shirt and jeans. I think pink is her favorite color. She is covering her face. I think she is wiping the tears from her painful expression. I guess she fell down while she was riding a bike. The bicycle crash must be painful as she is crying a lot now. She is wearing a yellow helmet which prevents her from being injured. If she doesn't didn’t wear the helmet, she would break the head and she might have to go to the hospital for treatment. Maybe this is the first time she's ridden a bike. And now, look at the woman. As we can see, the woman is blowing on the wound of the little girl for pain relief. She has yellow hair and an oval face. She is wearing a colorful shirt and jeans. Her hands are holding the girl's right hand. This photo reminds me of the first time I learned how to ride the bike. I fell a lot but I could stand up and continued riding. I really like this because it's very beautiful and helps me learn a lot of things. Bye. See you again.

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