Time : 2020-07-01 20:29:21
Điểm: 7/10
This picture is in a park in a sunny day.There is a girl cycling her bike on a path but she fall down off the bike and start to crying.She is wearing a lovely pink shirt and a blue jeans.She also wearing a new green bike helmet.She has long brown hair.Her bike is white and it is fall over on the path.When she is crying,there is a woman go and sit down next to the girl.She also wearing blue jeans and a colorful shirt.In the inside,she wearing a blue T-shirt.Her hair is do not long as the girl but her hair is brown,too.The woman face is white .The woman is looking at the girl's wound and make cool for it.The girl looking so sad and the woman lokking so worried.Next to the path there is grass in the park,a lots of grass.Far from two people,there are trees.I think the woman is very kind and the girl needs to be more careful.

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This picture is taken in a park on a sunny day.There is a girl cycling her bike on a path but she falls down off the bike and starts to crying.She is wearing a lovely pink shirt and a blue jeans.She is also wearing a new green bike helmet.She has long brown hair.Her bike is white and it is falls over on the path.When she is crying,there is a woman go coming and sitting down next to the girl.She is also wearing blue jeans and a colorful shirt.In the inside,she is wearing a blue T-shirt.Her hair is do not as long as the girl but her hair is brown,too.The woman’s face is white .The woman is looking at the girl's wound and make cool for trying to relieve it.The girl looks so sad and the woman looks so worried.Next to the path there is grass in the park,a lots of grass.Far from two people,there are trees.I think the woman is very kind and the girl needs to be more careful.

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