Time : 2020-07-04 18:16:03
Điểm: 8/10
Look at this picture, we can see a kind woman is helping a girl who felt off her bike. The woman has big eyes, blond hair and looks so beautiful in a plaid shirt and jeans. She is trying to ease the girl's pain. The girl who is helped is wearing a pink jacket and blue jeans. She is also wearing a green helmet. She might have an accident. She is crying loudly. When we look at this picture, we can see that in our life, there are so many good people who are always ready to help us when we are in trouble. And I think that, each person of us should be a kind and helpful person to make the world a better place to live.

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Look at this picture, we can see a kind woman is helping a girl who fell off her bike. The woman has big eyes, blond hair and looks so beautiful in a plaid shirt and jeans. She is trying to ease the girl's pain. The girl who is helped is wearing a pink jacket and blue jeans. She is also wearing a green helmet. She might have an accident. She is crying loudly. When we look at this picture, we can see that in our life, there are so many good people who are always ready to help us when we are in trouble. And I think that, each person of us should be a kind and helpful person to make the world a better place to live.

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