Time : 2020-03-19 10:52:58
Điểm: 9/10
What a beautiful picture! As you can see, there are two young girls talking on the vast green grass. I think they have the same age, and maybe they are classmate. I guess that because there is a big ancient house with many windows over there. It looks like a old university, especially the color of the university can make me feel that. In front of the picture, two girls are talking happily. The girl who is on the left of the picture is wearing a gray coat outside and a gray jeans. She has long black hair. The other girl who is talking with her is wearing a white T-shirt with a black coat. Her jeans are black, too. She has high bun. Around her are some school supplies such as a book, some notebooks, and her brown handbag. There are also some students around the university. They are walking, sitting on the grass or sitting on a bench to relax, enjoy the fresh air and watching the clouds on the immense white sky. Behind the university are many tall trees. They make the scenery look more beautiful and peaceful. I hope that the students can try their best and have a good studying at the university.

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What a beautiful picture! As you can see, there are two young girls talking on the vast green grass. I think they have are at the same age, and maybe they are classmates. I guess that because there is a big ancient house with many windows over there. It looks like an old university, especially the color of the university can make me feel that. In front of the picture, two girls are talking happily. The girl who is on the left of the picture is wearing a gray coat outside and a gray jeans. She has long black hair. The other girl who is talking with her is wearing a white T-shirt with a black coat. Her jeans are black, too. She has a high bun. Around her are some school supplies such as a book, some notebooks, and her brown handbag. There are also some students around the university. They are walking, sitting on the grass or sitting on a bench to relax, enjoying the fresh air and watching the clouds in the immense white sky. Behind the university are many tall trees. They make the scenery look more beautiful and peaceful. I hope that the students can try their best and have a good studying at the university.

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