Time : 2020-03-19 00:43:17
Điểm: 9/10
What a nice photo! It attracts me at the first sight. From this photo, it is not too difficult for us to understand what it is about. As we can see, the photo depicts a couple of girls who are sitting on the ground of the schoolyard which is very nature and fresh. The scenery here looks historic and luxury. It is coloured vintage to match with other one like white of the sky, green of forest located on the right of the photo and light green of the grass, creating harmony in colour. There are not too many nor too few people around this place. Take the man over there, who is sitting on the land and looking intently at something as an example or the two people wearing the same colour of the shirt, walking together and talking to each other about their favourite things. Now, look at the main character of this picture. As far as I can see, these two girls are in their twenties. The woman with her brown hair tied neatly has a upturned nose and radiant complexion. She is wearing a white shirt inside and a black long-sleeved jacket outside with dark blue tights and a pair of brown boots which is homologous with her hair color. And her backpack is lying on the ground which is next to her. Maybe the girl sitting opposite her is her buddy. If I am not wrong, she is an Asian person because of her black coarse hair. This female is also wearing a long-sleeved jacket outside which is gray like her friend within jeans and a set of shoes. They looks quite tall. From my perspective, they are all about 160 centimetres tall. Besides, they seem to be very happy when spending time together to talk about the lessons that they have learned from school. From my opinion, I suggest we should have an intimate friend when we study in a college or a university cause it can make us less lonely, encourage us to overcome challenges more often and sharing some good news which you have not known it before.

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What a nice photo! It attracts me at the first sight. From this photo, it is not too difficult for us to understand what it is about. As we can see, the photo depicts a couple of girls who are sitting on the ground of the schoolyard which is very natural and fresh. The scenery here looks historical and luxurious. It is coloured vintage to match with other one the surrounding like white of the sky, green of the forest located on the right of the photo and light green of the grass, creating harmony in colour. There are not too many nor too few people around this place. Take the man over there, who is sitting on the land and looking intently at something as an example or the two people wearing the same colour of the shirt, walking together and talking to each other about their favourite things. Now, look at the main character of this picture. As far as I can see, these two girls are in their twenties. The woman with her brown hair tied neatly has an upturned nose and radiant complexion. She is wearing a white shirt inside and a black long-sleeved jacket outside with dark blue tights and a pair of brown boots which is homologous with her hair color. And her backpack is lying on the ground which is next to her. Maybe the girl sitting opposite her is her buddy. If I am not wrong, she is an Asian person because of her black coarse hair. This female is also wearing a long-sleeved jacket outside which is gray like her friend within jeans and a set of shoes. They looks quite tall. From my perspective, they are all both about 160 centimetres tall. Besides, they seem to be very happy when spending time together to talk about the lessons that they have learned from school. From In my opinion, I suggest we should have an intimate friend when we study in a college or a university cause it can make us less lonely, encourage us to overcome challenges more often and sharing some good news which you have not known it before.

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