Time : 2020-03-19 10:52:16
Điểm: 9/10
Looking at the picture , I can see a beautiful view of the university . There are some students sitting on the grass . The two girls are talking to each other . Both of them are attractive with happy face . The girl who is on the left has a long black hair with gray blouse and gray trousers . As I can see , she is wearing a pair of shoes. I believe that she is Chinese .The girl who sit on the right has blone blun hair . She is wearing a black blouse outside with white T-shirt inside and black trousers . I think she is wearing brown boots . Near the two girls is a man . I think he is doing his homework or preparing for his clasees . He has short blonde hair with blue jacket and black trousers . I think he is wearing a pair of white shoes . Far away , I can see many students on the way to their classes and many other students are relaxing . And of course I can see a big buildings with ancient architecture . I think the building was built about 100 years ago . The environment is so clean with many green trees . And these are my opinions about the picture . Thank you and see you again in the next free-style picture.

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Looking at the picture , I can see a beautiful view of the university . There are some students sitting on the grass . The two girls are talking to each other . Both of them are attractive with happy faces . The girl who is on the left has a long black hair with a gray blouse and gray trousers . As I can see , she is wearing a pair of shoes. I believe that she is Chinese .The girl who sits on the right has blonde blun hair . She is wearing a black blouse outside with a white T-shirt inside and black trousers . I think she is wearing brown boots . Near the two girls is a man . I think he is doing his homework or preparing for his classes . He has short blonde hair with blue jacket and black trousers . I think he is wearing a pair of white shoes . Far away , I can see many students on the way to their classes and many other students are relaxing . And of course I can see a big buildings with ancient architecture . I think the building was built about 100 years ago . The environment is so clean with many green trees . And these are my opinions about the picture . Thank you and see you again in the next free-style picture.

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