Time : 2020-03-13 16:24:10
Điểm: 9/10
Hello, everyone. I'm shurei69. I am a member of TiengAnh123. I am really happy to do many exercises on Tieng Anh 123. Now in this lesson, I would like to describe this photo. This is my task:


What a nice photo! It attracts me at first sight.
From this photo, it is not too difficult for us to understand what it is about. As we can see, the photo depicts a cozy atmosphere in the gym is very clean and hygienic. The room looks vibrant and spacious.It is painted white and red to match with other fixtures.This room has a lot of modern and new treadmills.Now, look at the main character of this photo. As far as I can see, the woman is twenty - years old.She is wearing a pink three holes shirt and gray tight pants. She looks quite tall. From my perspective, she is about 170 centimetres tall. Her hair is black and I love woman with black hair. It contains a light charm.She has oval face and dark eyebrows.Her skin is brown.Look at her nose.What a nice nose she has ! It's high and so amazing.She has bright eyes, although I don't see her eyes clearly, I think that her eyes are black. I'm sure that he is so happy now because she is smiling very freshly and brightly.Ohh, she is so gorgeous, isn't she ?.If I am not wrong,she is doing gymnastics to has slim body.Woa,this photo is attractive, right?

I love this picture very much .Through TiengAnh123, I can learn many things about life skills and improve my English. Thank you very much. By the way, I wish you lots of health and success in your life. And now, this is the end of my text. Those are all of my descriptions about it. Thank you a lot for reading it ! Goodbye and see you again.

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Hello, everyone. I'm shurei69. I am a member of TiengAnh123. I am really happy to do many exercises on Tieng Anh 123. Now in this lesson, I would like to describe this photo. This is my task: What a nice photo! It attracts me at first sight. From this photo, it is not too difficult for us to understand what it is about. As we can see, the photo depicts a cozy atmosphere in the gym which is very clean and hygienic. The room looks vibrant and spacious.It is painted white and red to match with other fixtures.This room has a lot of modern and new treadmills.Now, look at the main character of this photo. As far as I can see, the woman is twenty - years old.She is wearing a pink three-holes shirt and gray tight pants. She looks quite tall. From my perspective, she is about 170 centimetres tall. Her hair is black and I love women with black hair. It contains a light charm.She has an oval face and dark eyebrows.Her skin is brown.Look at her nose.What a nice nose she has ! It's high and so amazing.She has bright eyes, although I don't see her eyes clearly, I think that her eyes are black. I'm sure that she is so happy now because she is smiling very freshly and brightly.Ohh, she is so gorgeous, isn't she ?.If I am not wrong,she is doing gymnastics to have a slim body.Woa,this photo is attractive, right? I love this picture very much .Through TiengAnh123, I can learn many things about life skills and improve my English. Thank you very much. By the way, I wish you lots of health and success in your life. And now, this is the end of my text. Those are all of my descriptions about it. Thank you a lot for reading it ! Goodbye and see you again.

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