Time : 2020-03-11 19:38:08
Điểm: 9/10
Hello teacher, as I said the other day, I will see you next time so I will do this exercise with the highest score. Let's go back to the topic. When looking at the picture, it is not too difficult to describe what the picture is about. As we have seen, this is a picture of a gym. In this picture, the first girl is the person who is most clearly photographed. It seems that she knows they are photographing her and those people who are blurred don't seem to know they're taking pictures. Around the gym, there are many modern running machines. The first three girls are wearing the same short and cool outfit. Everyone wears the same type of pants that are easily stretchable, so it feels like they are slim, that's my knowledge when studying Technology at school. It seems everyone in here is fine and I think they are very tall and slim. I think people took this picture in the morning or in the afternoon. The first girl was smiling brightly at the photographer. And the second girl I couldn't see her face clearly because she was covered by the hair of the first girl. I think the second person who has been exercising in this gym for a long time because I think she seems to be very good at using the machines at the gym. When I looked at it, I felt that the atmosphere was quite suffocating because they were taken at an angle that made people think this gym was very cramped. Well, now I noticed that the person on the right of the picture is the person and I think it's a man because I see this guy wearing a men's sports suit. Looks like I see everyone wearing a same color shirt and the color they wear is white. Bye teacher. I hope you can give me the highest score and most worthy of me. Goodbye and see you again on the next difficult picture writing test. And hope you give me a high score. Goodbye.

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Hello teacher, as I said the other day, I will see you next time so I will do this exercise with the highest score. Let's go back to the topic. When looking at the picture, it is not too difficult to describe what the picture is about. As we have seen, this is a picture of a gym. In this picture, the first girl is the person who is most clearly photographed. It seems that she knows they are photographing her and those people who are blurred don't seem to know they're taking pictures. Around the gym, there are many modern running machines. The first three girls are wearing the same short and cool outfit. Everyone wears the same type of pants that are easily stretchable, so it feels like they are slim, that's my knowledge when studying Technology at school. It seems everyone in here is fine and I think they are very tall and slim. I think people took this picture in the morning or in the afternoon. The first girl was smiling brightly at the photographer. And the second girl I couldn't see her face clearly because she was covered by the hair of the first girl. I think the second person who has been exercising in this gym for a long time because I think she seems to be very good at using the machines at the gym. When I looked at it, I felt that the atmosphere was quite suffocating because they were taken at an angle that made people think this gym was very cramped. Well, now I noticed that the person on the right of the picture is the person and I think it's a man because I see this guy wearing a men's sports suit. Looks like I see everyone is wearing a same color shirts and the color they wear is white. Bye teacher. I hope you can give me the highest score and most worthy of me. Goodbye and see you again on the next difficult picture writing test. And hope you give me a high score. Goodbye.

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