Time : 2020-03-14 08:27:53
Điểm: 9/10
Hello. Nice to see you again here. Today, I'll describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you. And now, let's start.

Look at the photo. When I saw this picture for the first time, I was so suprised because the lady wearing pink tracksuit has a cheerful smile although she's walking on the treadmill. She looks sporty because she is keeping her long hair tied back in a ponytail. I think she is a gymnast or she is a woman who always spends much time going to the gym because she seems to be pleasant. In the gym with the red wall, not only the lady that I have just described but also many people are pleasant and are concentrating on their activity now. Accordingly, I really admire them because they are in the habit of looking after their health consciously. So henceforth, I'll try to do gymnastic to have a good health.

This is the end of my text. I really fond of this picture. Thank you for reading my paragraph and checking it for me. Bye and see you soon.

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Hello. Nice to see you again here. Today, I'll describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you. And now, let's start. Look at the photo. When I saw this picture for the first time, I was so surprised because the lady wearing the pink tracksuit has a cheerful smile although she's walking on the treadmill. She looks sporty because she is keeping her long hair tied back in a ponytail. I think she is a gymnast or she is a woman who always spends much time going to the gym because she seems to be pleasant. In the gym with the red wall, not only the lady that I have just described but also many people are pleasant and are concentrating on their activity now. Accordingly, I really admire them because they are in the habit of looking after their health consciously. So henceforth, I'll try to do gymnastic to have a good health. This is the end of my text. I’m really fond of this picture. Thank you for reading my paragraph and checking it for me. Bye and see you soon.

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