Time : 2020-03-11 19:53:57
Điểm: 8/10
As you can see in the picture, there is four people. They are in the gym. All of them are running on the treadmills. The girl, who is wearing pink shirt has long black hair, an oval face and her shape is very nice with slim waist and solid body. She is smiling, she looks so beautiful. Next to her is a girl with long blonde hair, I can't see her face. he is wearing a white shirt and black jeans. Next to her, there is a girl, too. She is wearing white shirt and blue jeans. She has long black braid hair. She is wearing black shoes. Far away, you can see a man. He is wearing a white T-shirt, black shorts, black shoes. In front of each one, there is mirror. They are in a big gym room with lights. I think they go to the gym after their works. What a beautiful picture!

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As you can see in the picture, there is are four people. They are in the gym. All of them are running on the treadmills. The girl, who is wearing a pink shirt has long black hair, an oval face and her shape is very nice with a slim waist and a solid body. She is smiling, she looks so beautiful. Next to her is a girl with long blonde hair, I can't see her face. She is wearing a white shirt and black jeans. Next to her, there is a girl, too. She is wearing a white shirt and blue jeans. She has long black braid hair. She is wearing black shoes. Far away, you can see a man. He is wearing a white T-shirt, black shorts, black shoes. In front of each one, there is a mirror. They are in a big gym room with lights. I think they go to the gym after their works. What a beautiful picture!

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8.5/10