Time : 2019-08-04 21:21:45
Điểm: 9/10
As you can see, the picture describes a student who is studying in the room. The room looks bright and spotlessly clean. There is a wooden table and a black chair. On the table, there is a pencil case with lots of different colour pencils. Besides, there is also the boy’s homework. May be the homework that the teacher gave him too hard to do so he is very angry.
We can only see a boy in the heart of the picture. He has got short black hair with a square face, a straight nose, thin lips and white complexion. He is wearing a T-shirt and a grey sweater. He is wearing glasses too. He is holding an orange pencil in his right hand to write something. He is angry and going to cry because of difficult homework. But don’t worry, I’m sure you can do it if you try your best. What a nice picture!

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As you can see, the picture describes a student who is studying in the room. The room looks bright and spotlessly clean. There is a wooden table and a black chair. On the table, there is a pencil case with lots of different coloured pencils. Besides, there is also the boy’s homework. Maybe the homework that the teacher gave him is too hard to do so he is very angry. We can only see a boy in the heart of the picture. He has got short black hair with a square face, a straight nose, thin lips and white complexion. He is wearing a T-shirt and a grey sweater. He is wearing glasses too. He is holding an orange pencil in his right hand to write something. He is angry and going to cry because of difficult homework. But don’t worry, I’m sure you can do it if you try your best. What a nice picture!

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