Time : 2019-07-31 20:27:51
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Hi guys, it is a long time since I last described the picture. Now I will do it. Let's read my writing!
Look at the picture!
As you can see, there is a boy sitting on the chair. He maybe in his room studying his exercises.
On the table, I can see many exercise books, a green cup full of pencils which have many different colors. The table is brown which is made from expensive wood.
The boy is just about six or seven years old. He looks very young and quite handsome with his black short hair, high nose and fair skin.
He is wearing glasses so he maybe short-sighted.
I think the weather can be very cold outside because the boy is wearing a gray shirt inside and a gray sweater outside. This outfit fit him very well.
He is holding a orange pencil to write the answer into the book.
One interesting thing in this picture is the emotional face of the boy! As you can see, he looks quite uncomfortable. I guess that the exercises are too difficult for the boy to do. That is the reason why he is so angry like that.
This is the end of my writing. Thanks for reading mine and see you soon next time. Goodbye!

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Hi guys, it is a long time since I last described the picture. Now I will do it. Let's read my writing! Look at the picture! As you can see, there is a boy sitting on the chair. He may be in his room studying his exercises. On the table, I can see many exercise books, a green cup full of pencils which have many different colors. The table is brown which is made from expensive wood. The boy is just about six or seven years old. He looks very young and quite handsome with his black short hair, a high nose and fair skin. He is wearing glasses so he may be short-sighted. I think the weather can be very cold outside because the boy is wearing a gray shirt inside and a gray sweater outside. This outfit fits him very well. He is holding an orange pencil to write the answer into the book. One interesting thing in this picture is the emotional face of the boy! As you can see, he looks quite uncomfortable. I guess that the exercises are too difficult for the boy to do. That is the reason why he is so angry like that. This is the end of my writing. Thanks for reading mine and see you soon next time. Goodbye!

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