Time : 2019-08-01 08:30:55
Điểm: 9/10
Hello. Nice to see you again here. Today, I'll describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you. And now, let's start.Look at the photo, there is a little boy. He is wearing a gray woolen jacket and the dark-red rimmed glasses. He has short black hair and fair skin. Now he is studying and sitting on the black armchair. I think the exercises are too hard that makes he unhappy and worried. The boy is taking a yellow pencil but he isn't writing. On the desk, there are some books, some notebooks and a pencil case which contains the pencils with many colors.One of these book has a bright blue cover The wall is white. I hope the little boy'll finish all exercise correct. This is the end of my text. Thank you for reading my paragraph and checking it for me. Bye and see you soon.

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Hello. Nice to see you again here. Today, I'll describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you. And now, let's start.Look at the photo, there is a little boy. He is wearing a gray woolen jacket and the dark-red rimmed glasses. He has short black hair and fair skin. Now he is studying and sitting on the black armchair. I think the exercises are too hard that makes him unhappy and worried. The boy is taking a yellow pencil but he isn't writing. On the desk, there are some books, some notebooks and a pencil case which contains the pencils with many colors.One of these books has a bright blue cover The wall is white. I hope the little boy'll finish all exercises correct. This is the end of my text. Thank you for reading my paragraph and checking it for me. Bye and see you soon.

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