Time : 2019-08-01 17:30:10
Điểm: 10/10
Hello. Glad to see you again. As usual, I'm here to describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you ! Ok, let's start. There is a boy in the picture. He is wearing a warm grey sweater and a white shirt; moreover; he is also wearing red glasses. He has short black hair, a fair complexion and quite pale lips. Look at him, how stressful he is ! He is concentrating on his exercise. Perhaps the exercise is difficult for him. He is scratching on his head. His book is quite thick and has a lot of exercises, I think so. He is using a yellow pencil to do his exercise. Besides, there is a green pen bottle on the table. There are a lot of various colorful crayons inside such as: pink, green, cyan, moss green, dark blue, pale blue, black, greenish, deep red, tawny, coffee-coloured, orange, brown, ...etc... Well, he is focusing on the book. But he hasn't found the the answer yet. Hmm, I can understand his feelings now. I did quite many difficult exercises, especially Math. Well, the Math exercises are not easy. Sometimes, I wanted to give up doing them. But until I could find the answers, I felt very very happy and jubilate ! Hmm, that feeling is quite hard to describe. But generally, maybe if we don't give up the effort, we can do it or the success will come to us ! So, I hope the boy in the picture will be more comfortable, relax and he can find the answer of his exercise as soon as possible. Now, let me describe some about his study place. Perhaps his place is quiet and peaceful. The room is nice, the table is big and tidy, and the chair is elegant. Ok, these are all of my descriptions. This is the end of my text. Thank you for reading and checking it for me. Goodbye and see you again.

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Hello. Glad to see you again. As usual, I'm here to describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you ! Ok, let's start. There is a boy in the picture. He is wearing a warm grey sweater and a white shirt; moreover; he is also wearing red glasses. He has short black hair, a fair complexion and quite pale lips. Look at him, how stressful he is ! He is concentrating on his exercise. Perhaps the exercise is difficult for him. He is scratching on his head. His book is quite thick and has a lot of exercises, I think so. He is using a yellow pencil to do his exercise. Besides, there is a green pen bottle on the table. There are a lot of various colorful crayons inside such as: pink, green, cyan, moss green, dark blue, pale blue, black, greenish, deep red, tawny, coffee-coloured, orange, brown, ...etc... Well, he is focusing on the book. But he hasn't found the the answer yet. Hmm, I can understand his feelings now. I did quite many difficult exercises, especially Math. Well, the Math exercises are not easy. Sometimes, I wanted to give up doing them. But until I could find the answers, I felt very very happy and jubilate ! Hmm, that feeling is quite hard to describe. But generally, maybe if we don't give up the effort, we can do it or the success will come to us ! So, I hope the boy in the picture will be more comfortable, relaxed and he can find the answer of his exercise as soon as possible. Now, let me describe some about his study place. Perhaps his place is quiet and peaceful. The room is nice, the table is big and tidy, and the chair is elegant. Ok, these are all of my descriptions. This is the end of my text. Thank you for reading and checking it for me. Goodbye and see you again.

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