Time : 2019-05-15 21:19:19
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Christchurch Call opposes extreme contents on social networks

After the occurence of a horrendous attack on two mosques in Christchurch in March resulting in 51 casualties, the Prime Minister of New Zealand Jacinda Ardem, who was highly active, along with world leaders, will launch Christchurch Call for the purpose of preventing and repelling extreme contents on the Internet.

Based on the plan, leaders attending the international conference held in Paris on May 15th will indicate their consensus in resolute prevention of violent and terrorist contents on social networks and Internet platforms.

The Prime Minister Adern is vigorously moblizing delegates who take part in the international conference in Paris to change strategies for putting a stop to extreme posts on the Internet as well as promptly remove such contents.

She clarified that the governments wouldn't be able to succeed were it not for the support from technology companies.






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Christchurch Call opposes extreme contents on social networks

After the occurrence of a horrendous attack in two mosques in Christchurch in March resulting in 51 casualties, the Prime Minister of New Zealand Jacinda Ardem, who was highly actively campaigned, along with world leaders, will together with world leaders launch Christchurch Call for the purpose of preventing and repelling extreme contents on the Internet.

Based on the plan, leaders attending the international conference held in Paris on May 15th will indicate their consensus in resolute prevention of the extreme, violent and terrorism contents on social networks and Internet platforms.

The Prime Minister Adern is vigorously mobilizing delegates who take part in the international conference in Paris to change strategies for putting a stop to extreme posts on the Internet as well as promptly remove such contents.

She clarified that the governments wouldn't be able to succeed were it not for the support from technology companies.

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