Time : 2018-12-08 22:47:08
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The 82-year-old woman did a spectacular parachute jump from more than 4000m

The 82-year-old South African woman has done her spectacular parachute jump at a height of more than 4000m in Dubai before many people's admiration. Not many people, even youngsters can do this.

Ms. Hilde, the South African woman, has broken her own record, completed a spectacular parachute jump over 4000m and landed successfully in Dubai.

The 82-year-old woman said, she would annually come to Dubai to visit her family and travel. When seeing youngsters doing parachute, she always wished to do this.

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The 82-year-old woman did a spectacular parachute jump from a height of more than 4000m

The 82-year-old South African woman has done her spectacular parachute jump at a height of more than 4000m in Dubai before many people's admiration. Not many people, even youngsters can do this.

Ms. Hilde, the South African woman, has broken her own record when completing a spectacular parachute jump at an altitude of over 4000m and landing successfully in Dubai.

The 82-year-old woman said, she would annually come to Dubai to visit her family and travel. When seeing youngsters go skydiving doing parachute, she always wished to do this.

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