Time : 2020-05-07 14:21:30
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Billions of people could live in areas too hot for humans in 2070

According to a new study, if the Earth continues to warm at current levels over the next 50 years, there would have 3 billions people could be living in areas that are too hot for humans.

For thousands of years, humans have lived within a narrow "climate niche" where average temperatures are ideal for social development, and many good conditions to grow food and keep livestock.

In the new findings published on Monday in the Proceedings of the American Academy of Sciences, many archaeologists, climate scientists and ecologists said that if heat-trapping greenhouse gas emissions continue at this current situation, billions of people will be living in areas too hot for humans to be able to survive by 2070.

But there's still hope for humanity. According to many scientists, by reducing carbon emissions rapidly, it will halve the number of people, who are living in the heat.

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Billions of people could live in areas that/ which are (nên dùng mệnh đề quan hệ khi bạn để tính từ ở sau) too hot for humans in 2070

According to a new study, if the Earth continues to warm at current levels over the next 50 years, there would will (dùng trong câu điều kiện loại 1) have 3 billions people could be living in areas dùng mệnh đề quan hệ that are too hot for humans.

For thousands of years, humans have lived within a narrow "climate niche" where average temperatures are ideal for social development, society to develop/ flourish (chỉ mục đích) and many good conditions to grow food and keep livestock.

In the new findings published on Monday in the Proceedings of the American Academy of Sciences, many a group of archaeologists, climate scientists and ecologists said that if heat-trapping greenhouse gas emissions continue at this current situation, billions of people will be living in areas which are too hot for humans to be able to survive by 2070.

But there's still hope for humanity. According to many scientists, by reducing carbon emissions rapidly, it will halve the number of people, who are living in the heat.

 

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