Time : 2020-05-09 10:52:29
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Billions of people are going to live in areas where the heat exceeds the bearable threshold in 2070

A new research pointed put that if the Earth continues to heat up at the present rate in the next 50 years, there will be 3 billions people who dwell in areas that is too hot to tolerate.

For thousands years, human has lived in a narrow " climate niches", where the average temperature is always ideal for society to develop, and the conditions are optimal for growing food and breeding.

Among discoveries pulished in Yearbook of American Academy of Sciences on the last Monday, a group of international archaeologists, climatologists, ecologists claimed that if greenhouse gases emission continued to maintain at present speed, billions of people would live in areas whose temperature would be excessive for human to exist.

However, There's hope for the humanity. Scientists said that by significant and fast global reduction in carbon emission, the number of people living in the relentless heat will diminish half.

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Billions of people are going to live in areas where the heat exceeds the bearable threshold in 2070

A new research pointed put? that if the Earth continues to heat up at the present rate in the next 50 years, there will be 3 billions people who dwell in areas that is too hot to tolerate for humans.

For thousands years, humans have has lived in a narrow " climate niches", where the average temperature is always ideal for society to develop, and the conditions are optimal for growing food and breeding.dùng to V sau tính từ

Among According to/ Based on discoveries pulished chính tả in Yearbook of American Academy of Sciences on the last Monday, a group of international archaeologists, climatologists, ecologists claimed that if greenhouse gases danh từ số ít trước danh từ khác emissions continued to maintain at present speed, billions of people would live dùng câu điều kiện loại 1 chỉ sự có thể in areas whose temperature would be excessive for humans to exist.

However, There's hope for the humanity. Scientists said that by significant and fast global reduction in carbon emission, the number of people living in the relentless heat will diminish reduce half.

 

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