Time : 2020-05-10 22:12:34
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Billions of people will have to live in the areas where the sun is scorching by 2070

If the Earth continues to warm up in accordance with the current extent in the next 50 years, up to 3 billion people can live in areas that are extremely hot at the end of their rope, based on a new study's data.

For thousands of years, humans have lived in a narrow "climate niche", where the average temperatures are not only ideal for society to flourish but also favorable conditions to grow food and keep livestock.

In findings published by the Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences on Monday, it was a circle of archaeologists, climatologists, and ecologists who proclaimed that if heat-trapping greenhouse gas emissions continue at the current pace, billions of people will live in conditions that are extremely hot to be in being.

Nevertheless, it's still hopeful for humanity. What a bunch of scientists said was that the number of people living in extreme heat can be halved thanks to the swift and significant reduction of global carbon emissions.

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Billions of people will have to live in the areas where the sun weather is scorching by 2070

If the Earth continues to warm up in accordance with the current extent levels in the next 50 years, up to 3 billion people can live in areas that are extremely hot at the end of their rope, based on a new study's data.

For thousands of years, humans have lived in a narrow "climate niche", where the average temperatures are not only ideal for society to flourish but also [removed]bạn dùng not only ... but also không đúng, bởi chưa tương quan từ loại; sau not onle bạn dùng tính từ, sau but also bạn lại dùng cụm danh từ) favorable conditions to grow food and keep livestock.

In findings published by the Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences on Monday, it was a circle group of archaeologists, climatologists, and ecologists who proclaimed that if heat-trapping greenhouse gas emissions continue at the current pace, billions of people will live in conditions that are extremely hot to survive be in being.

Nevertheless, it's still hopeful dùng cấu trúc there tobe + danh từ hope for humanity. What a bunch group of scientists said was that the number of people living in extreme heat can be halved thanks to the swift and significant reduction of global carbon emissions.

 

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