Time : 2020-03-20 14:44:48
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Japan’s trial for robot cooking Saba noodles at Tokyo station

Recently, a start up company, JR East has progressed robot for cooking Saba noodles on trial to serve passengers at Tokyo station


Robots were setted at Higashi-Koganei station of Chuo railway route, which is cappable of doing 40 Soba noodle dishes per one hour equivalently a cook’s productivity. Robots are in charge of boiling noodles meanwhiile staffs are responsible for putting it on dishes to serve passengers.


JR East said the trial would last to April 15th to assess whether or not robot’s operation is effective and satified expectation of passengers who are keen on Soba noodles.

According to a saleman, the use of robots can help people to release from cooking in summer’s hot weather as well as risk of burned due to boilling noodles. Besides, cooks will have more time to do other works such as communication with passengers, cooking fried food and washing dishes when robots boil noodles.

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Japan’s trial for robot cooking Saba noodles at Tokyo station

Recently, a start up company, JR East has progressed robot for cooking Saba noodles on trial to serve passengers at Tokyo station

Robots were setted chú ý động từ bất quy tắc at Higashi-Koganei station of Chuo railway route mệnh đề quan hệ, which mệnh đề chính is cappable of doing 40 Soba noodle dishes per one hour, equivalently dùng mệnh đề quan hệ which is equivalent to hoặc rút gọn equivalent to a cook’s productivity. Robots are in charge of boiling noodles meanwhiile staffs are responsible for putting it on dishes to serve passengers.


JR East said the trial would last to April 15th to assess whether or not để cuối ý robot’s operation is effective and satified it satisfies (vế trước dùng tobe nên dùng chủ ngữ ở vế sau khi bạn dùng and để tránh nhầm lẫn động từ) expectation of passengers who are keen on Soba noodles.

According to a saleman, the use of robots can help people to release from cooking in summer’s hot weather as well as risk of being (bị động của Ving sau giới từ) burned due to boilling noodles. Besides, cooks will have more time to do other works such as communication with passengers, cooking fried food and washing dishes when robots boil noodles.

 

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