Time : 2020-03-11 17:38:51
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Five powers committed to obey Nuclear Nonproliferation Treaty (NPT)nnOn March 10th, the top diplomats of the US, China, Brittain, France and Russia expressed a strong support for NPT to commemorate 50 years of that event.nnIn the general statement, five secretaries of state of five nuclear powers claimed that those countries committed to obey NPT to follow the negotiations with effective methods to remove nuclear weapons. Many sides highly appreciated the big contributions for the people's security and prosperity in the world since this treaty took effect.nnThe secretaries warned that nothing ensured NPT's success in the future and stressed that that belonged to power's efforts to cooperate and maintain continuingly.nnNPT was adopted by United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and began to take effect from March, 5th 1970.

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Five powers committed dùng hiện tại đơn để miêu tả sự cam kết cho hiện tại hoặc tương lai to obey Nuclear Nonproliferation Treaty (NPT)

nnOn March 10th, the top diplomats of the US, China, Brittain, France and Russia expressed a danh từ không đếm được, không dùng a strong support for NPT to commemorate 50 years of that event of the entry into force.

nnIn the general statement, five secretaries of state for Foreign Affairs of five nuclear powers claimed that those countries committed to obey NPT to follow the negotiations with effective methods to remove nuclear weapons. Many (các bên - 5 nước) The sides highly appreciated the big contributions for the không dùng the với people với nghĩa mọi người people's security and prosperity in the world that this treaty has made (thiếu mệnh đề ở hiện tại hoàn thành với since) since this treaty took effect.

nnThe secretaries warned that nothing ensured NPT's success in the future and stressed that that belonged to power's sở hữu cách với danh từ số nhiều efforts to cooperate and maintain continuingly.

nnNPT was adopted by United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and began to take effect from on (dùng giới từ với cả ngày tháng năm khi bạn dùng quá khứ đơn với began) March, 5th 1970.

 

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