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5 great powers pledge to complying with the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty
On March 10, the top diplomats of the United States, China, Britain, France and Russia expressed strong support for the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty (NPT) on the occasion of the 50th year this document take effects.
In general statement, the foreign ministers of the five great powers reaffirmed their nations 's commitment to abide by the NPT in pursuit of negotiation on effective measures towards denuclearization. The parties appreciated the great contributions this historic document had made to the people 's security and prosperity around the world since the treaty had taken effect.
The foreign ministers warned that there was no guarantee of the success of the NPT in the future, emphasized that this would depend on the collaboration efforts and continuous maintenance of the nuclear powers.
The NPT was approved by the United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and came into effect on March 5, 1970.

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5 great powers pledge to complying with the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty
On March 10, the top diplomats of the United States, China, Britain, France and Russia expressed strong support for the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty (NPT) on the occasion of the 50th year anniversary of the entry that took effect this document take effects.
In general statement, the foreign ministers of the five great powers reaffirmed their nations' (chú ý dùng sở hữu cách với danh từ số nhiều) 's commitment to abide by the NPT in pursuit of negotiation on effective measures towards denuclearization. The parties appreciated the great contributions this historic document treaty had made dùng hiện tại hoàn thành với hành động xảy ra và kép dài đến hiện tại hoặc tương lai to the people 's security and prosperity around the world since the treaty had taken dùng quá khứ đơn sau since effect.
The foreign ministers warned that there was no guarantee of the success of the NPT in the future, emphasized that this would depend on the collaboration efforts and continuous maintenance of the nuclear powers.
The NPT was approved by the United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and came into effect on March 5, 1970.

 

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